Genie......Thanks for that....... I wrote that copy years ago for our old website and Larry chose to lift it and use it.
I asked him what he thought. (He's a former high school English teacher) and he said it was fine......... But yes, I see what you mean.
This is the sort of stuff I appreciate getting input about. After reading and re-reading the same things, one gets sort of cross-eyed. I'm just now noticing a couple of minor corrections that could be made.
I asked him what he thought. (He's a former high school English teacher) and he said it was fine......... But yes, I see what you mean.
This is the sort of stuff I appreciate getting input about. After reading and re-reading the same things, one gets sort of cross-eyed. I'm just now noticing a couple of minor corrections that could be made.
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