Well, since she is serious about her writing, $50 for a professional critique seems like a good investment to me.I don't know if I would have wanted to pay $50 for a critique. Lol. Has she thought about self-publishing on Amazon?
Self-publishing is like a full time job. And not everyone has the personality/talents for advertising/computer networking/software management. Also, if one has a full-time job, and writes, it is as though the writer has 3 full time jobs if he self-publishes.